not very dream like

sounds more like a carnival then a dream

bravo

this is kish as hell =)

maybe you could have added some high pitch rythmatic stabs at the second half but for menu music this is as classy as it gets

waaaay to much going on here

you need to learn how to properly balance out your sounds because if you have everything up front its just going to sound like a big mess, the listener wont know what to actually listen to because you have all these powerful synth sounds fighting and clashing with each other, also you sort of shot yourself in the foot by drowning out the beat which is a huge no no in electronic music